A very brief but a very beautiful homage. Super smooth!

The style of narration reminds me of the Two Brothers commercial in Rick and Morty, so great!

Sounds a lot more like hardstyle/techno than ambient, but your use of harmonies and sound design shows promise for sure! Though beware overcrowding your mix with elements, as sometimes they fight amongst each other! In those cases, some EQ may help.

I'm impressed with the depth of your distortion; as someone who likes it hard it's very admirable! Though there are some tradeoffs that come with throwing the overdrive to eleven—the melody at the beginning is far too loud compared to the rest of the mix. Later on, I hear the same sound at a much better volume. Unless your intent was to blow everyone's eardrums at the start, I'd suggest tempering the post-gain so that, while it may be louder at the start, it isn't on the verge of painful.

The mix itself is a bit muddy, as the beat sounds like it's being swallowed by the melody; perhaps more sidechaining or better EQing would help with that. The melodic riff and the rhythm I enjoy, you seem to know how to do syncopation very well.

Nice kick, well distorted with a classic hardcore feel. Wish the kick was used in an actual track than what sounds right now like a WIP.

Also, the boing vocal could use some acoustics, EQ, and distortion to mix well with the kick.